Dachampster's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[hIpHoP eAtS uS aLiVe]

not bad

needs more instruments though.
this is more like rap though

[Super Mario World Ghost Remix]

\m/___(n___n)___\m/

Wow, I'm too tired to make a review but this goes without saying that this is the best mario metal remix out there

[White X-Mass]

If I heard X-mass one more time....

its christmas...

Nice song

sorohanro responds:

Happy Holidays !

[Christmas is coming!]

Nice

It would be nicer if you added a christmas song melody in here somewhere.

Also, you might want to add a stronger bass and different drums.

Im doing Christmas songs as well, please check them out!

MattAtTheSeams responds:

Yeah, I get what you're talking about. =] It's not really supposed to be Christmas-y at all, I just listened to it when I was done and was like, "Hmmmm...." Haha, but I'll definitely work on the bass and drums. Thanks!

[Blue brass of the beast]

Head Bobbin' finger lickin' good

Drum: 3/2- Extremely catchy, great rhythm, pretty much perfect.

Bass: 1/2- This song definitely needed some low heavy bass. You had bass, but it wasn't continual, and wasn't low enough. It was lacking in that part.

Melody: 2/2- The "bass" that you had here pretty much acted as the melody. There wasn't much to it, but it really added to the mood of the song, and I appreciate that in this song.

Flow: 1/2- This song was a little too choppy for me, I don't know if its a taste in music-- must not be because this is my favorite genre of music. It sounds like you took the song and broke it into pieces.

Mood: 2/2- "Blue Brass of the Beast" was a pretty deadly-sounding title, and you brought the pain with the drums here. Good job portraying the mood. Deep, dark and deadly song.

OVERALL: 9/10- Great song dude.

[screw it]

c++

Hopefully thats not your grade.

I feel lucky, I only have to work with javascript and css.

I liked this song, faved it a while ago, just thought I'd provide feedback.

Bass: 2/2
Drum: 1/2
Melody: 1/2
Flow: 2/2
Mood: 2/2

[Pokemon HG/SS - Johto Gym]

GSC to HGSS

They sound the same. Good job gamefreaks.

Your remix is incredibly skeletal. It sound like it should be on the gameboy. The melody is catchy, so you got points. Overall, not bad, far from good though.

[Game Corner remix]

I listened to that too.

I liked it too.

Not bad, not good either.
Dont have my criteria so no details.

[I are own your base]

I ARE OWN YOUR SPEAKERS

Melody: 1/2
Bass: 0/2
Drum: 0/2
Effort: 1/2
Listen ability: 2/2
Catchiness: 2/2
Smoothness: 1/2
Structure: 0/2
Instrument use: 2/2
Mood: lol

OVERALL: 11/20------6/10-----------3/5

SUGGESTION SECTOR:
There is a ton of stuff to put in here, but the thing is this is a laugh song. I could go on and on about the things that need improvement. If you want me to seriously review something, ask. My reviews are extremely helpful.

FINAL WORD:
Cheeseburgers.

zcool888 responds:

oh, well like you said, this IS a joke.

on the other hand I would like to make a good song, so your tips would be grandly appreciated. Although, instead of giving me tips on building up on this song, maybe give me pointers to a good song in general (if thats not asking too much :P).

thanks in advance.

ps. cheezburgers R gud :D

[[DJP] 000040 Preview]

Okay

"...ummm... how did this get on the best tracks ever list?... how did this get NUMBER 1 on best tracks ever... >.<"

Honestly, I have no idea.

Melody: 1/2- Not very inspiring...
Bass: 1/2 - notes were too high here
Drum: 1/2- try harder next time
Effort: 2/2- sounds like you put some work into it
Listen ability: 2/2- easy listening track
Catchiness: 2/2- catchy. In a hypnotizing kind of way
Smoothness: 2/2- very smooth
Structure: 2/2- good
Instrument use: 1/2 didnt like these
Mood: 0/2- this doesnt really sound like DnB because it doesnt have any DnB in it.

OVERALL: 14/20 7/10 3/5

SUGGESTION SECTOR:

I think you shouldnt do DnB. Your style is obviously smooth listening techno tracks by the way this song came out. This didnt have a pumping bass and drum beats like DnB should. Drum and Bass is not about the synths as much as it is about the Drum and Bass (why its called so). The idea was all wrong, but had this just been a regular techno track it would have better.

PRAISE STATION:

Look at the categories

FINAL WORD:

I have to go, sorry I couldnt put in a more in depth review

DJPureSuffer responds:

yeah, I dont see how this could get this spot. no complaints tho, lol XD There was no real melody that stands out in this song in my eyes. yeah, i never really did any d'n'b projects after this. I realized that I diddnt really know how to do it. lol. so I stick to my trance and techno for now. Thanks for the nice long review.