Dachampster's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Control: Damage-]

INTENSE BATTLE

Score > 9000
Waterflame = Win

I'm still gonna fail that Geometry test tomorrow though

[Derrick & JapeApe -- Lost]

UNZ UNZ UNZ

Nice
I also break down songs to review, so you're in luck.

Melody: 1/2- It's not bad. I think that you did well making a mesmerizing lead here. I felt myself drifting off into thought and dazing out a couple times.

Drums: 2/2- I really liked it at the beginning, it got a little repetitive at times though. However, I liked the beat that was being repeated, so it's alright with me.

Bass: 1/2- Techno requires bass, and while you have it, I dont think you used it properly. I think you could have even used a synth pad and made it low octave to use on this song. It has such a mystic quality to it.

Instruments: 2/2- Cant beat what instruments you have here in this song. Everything is mixed right, gives it that mystical quality. The bass instrument should have been changed.

Mood: 2/2- As I said multiple times, it really has a deep and mystical quality to it, its incredibly easy to listen to and doze off to.

OVERALL 8/10- I really like this- good work!

Yodamanjaro responds:

This is trance, not techno. lol but thanks for the review anyways!

[-Outrun-]

AWESOME

Amazing

Melody: 2/2- Catchy, keeps you listening without checking to see how much time the song has left.

Drums: 3/2- UNZ UNZ UNZ UNZ UNZ UNZ oh sorry.

Bass: 2/2- No comment just take the 2/2

Instruments: 1/2- It got really clashy with the same-sounding instruments playing at the same time. You should have done what you usually do and get all of those weird instruments in there. In the middle of the song I heard that.

Mood: 2/2- Dude I'd be too busy dancing to outrun anything.

OVERALL: 10/10 You did it again

[-set sail-]

1/3 time? WHO GIVES A F*CK

I counted the beats, and I'm sure this is 4/4. No matter which way I count... or maybe I dont know what 1/3 time is. I only know 3/4. But it sounded great.

ANYWAY.

Melody: 1/2- Wasn't as powerful and moving as some of your other work. Repetitive as well, not good.

Drums: 3/2- I love this drum beat. I'm still confused about 1/3 time, but this is awesome.

Bass: 1/2- Definitely not enough of it. MOAR bass would make this song epic.

Instruments: 2/2- I love your style of picking the WEIRDEST sounding instruments ever and put them together masterfully with a solid beat.

Mood: 1/2- Ehh. I dont see how this is pirate-like at all. Maybe use some old style instruments to back it up. I dont really get a ship sailing feel out of this, besides for a few parts I can feel the wind.

OVERALL: 8/10- Not your best work, but what's not your best work is usually still better than half of the techno i see out there. Downloaded cuz I can

[{Blaze}]

q(O_O)p \m/

AWESOME
Melody: 2/2
Drums: 1/2
Bass: 2/2
Instruments: 2/2
Mood: 2/2

[Cynthia Remix]

not bad

Melody: 1/2- *waves hand in jedi fashion* Their are not the synths you're looking for.

Drums: 1/2- If you have an orchestral drum instrument on your program, you might want to use it. These drums did not effectively portray a battle mood. They are way too shallow.

Bass: 1/2- I would suggest using a deep bass string for this piece.

Instruments used: 1/2- I really think the synths were out of place. I honestly did not want to give you any points for it, but I think the back up instruments helped a lot.

Mood: 2/2- The faster tempo makes up for some of the sloppiness here, and I actually did like the drums, I just didnt give you full points because they werent great.

OVERALL: 6/10- The song needed a little more depth to it

[-RocketRace-]

LOVE IT

Amazing

Melody: 1/2- The song would benefit for having one throughout, but it didnt suffer. THere was hardly any orchestra in here at all, you needed more in there.

Bass: 2/2- The synth guitar-sounding thing was awesome, the other bass was weak.

Drums: 2/2- Great as usual.

Instruments Used: 2/2- that hardcore synth gave this song so much energy. The orchestra should have been more prominent, so that will keep you from getting an improper fraction.

Mood: 2/2- Decent at portraying a race between orchestra and techno. Techno won by a longshot. I think you should have made it closer.

OVERALL: 9/10- I told you I would toughen up the points system

[Run n' Rave _AKG_]

WOWZORZ

Melody: 1/2- It wasn't bad. It didn't seem much more than a scale though, I think there should be a main melody with this as the backup and filler. I liked how its catchy, but I really think it gets repetitive and sometimes annoying, especially because its fighting a hard trance bass.
Bass: 2/2- Nice work on it. Now, this is one of the few songs where the bass should be turned down like a half decibel. It would be good without all of the melody synths and their volume, but it makes the song sound messy and clashing at times.
Drums: 1/2- There needs to be volume control throughout. The synths are way too loud, and the drums are low. The drums themselves are very uninspired, and do not add any energy to the song at all. I do like them at the beginning of the song, makes me wanna dance until i cant hear them.
Instruments: 1/2- I didnt like some of the synths you have here. They are too low, and kill the rest of the instruments off. There needs to be volume control here. The bass can be way too loud at times, and the solution to this is NOT to turn the main synths up. I know the sound screws up when imported, but it rarely ever makes the bass louder.
Mood: 2/2- I think it really catches the rave mood. However, about 60% of the rave mood flows from the drum beats, and I dont think you completely captured that in the heavier parts of the song.

OVERALL: 7/10
Catchiness Bonus: +1
FINAL SCORE: 8/10- You pulled it off well, it got sloppy at times.

Adachiskindagod responds:

thanks for the in depth review :)

[River Of Endless Thoughts]

Nice

Melody: 2/2- nice and simple, dont need to change it. I think the trumpets should be turned down a little bit.
Drums: N/A- Points moved to Instruments sect
Bass: 1/2- TO make the song deeper, you should have used louder bass strings.
Instruments: 2/4- The guitar doesnt compute with the ambient sounds, but you actually made it work in some cases impressively, so it works.
Mood: 1/2- The thundering sound at the beginning was out of place. I think you should have used river water sounds instead. I didnt like the guitar in some places.

OVERALL: 6/10- Pretty good mix.

[-Emotion Burst locomotion]

BOMCHABOMBOMCHA

CATCHY

Melody: 3/2- Extremely catchy, so simple... it sound like funk or soul music
Drums: 2/2- Struck gold with this beat. Its incredibly catchy.
Bass: 1/2- Not as heavy as your other songs, but good nonetheless.
Instruments: 2/2- I loved the piano and the french horn/trombone. Really added class and realism to the song. And you knew when the song was ok without them.
Mood: 2/2- A freight train bound for Partyville

OVERALL: 10/10- Nice work