Dachampster's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fight The Devil!]

The devil is dumb

to think he stood a chance against this song.

I didnt like the near lack of base and just the crunchy guitar riff for the first parts of the song. It really wasnt very easy to listen to. It's done very well, and I can see you put a lot of effort into this. It has an epic feel to it.
OVERALL: 8/10
Solo being epic bonus: +3
FInal Score: 11/10
\m/__q(^o^)p__\m/

Burn7 responds:

It wouldn't have been quite as boring if I had kept the vocals in there. But thanks, I'm glad you liked it nontheless.

[Techno Demo #003 - House]

Nice

Nice quick loop.
I dont feel like going in depth because there's not much to the song.

good job

[Darker Cave]

not going in depth

I like everything except for the drums. DnB and Breakbeat beats fit very well with that nasty bassline. I'm speaking from my own failure here. Good job, and check mine out please! Its my newest submission

Cetaphobic responds:

I personally really like the drums but thanks for the input!

[B7 - Galactic Patronage]

easy to listen to

Melody: 2/2- Nice work, no comments. Might need to be a regular synth, and let the back-ups take the pad-like feel.

Bass: 1/2-A deep, mellow sound would work here, maybe like the one at 2:30, but for the entire song. Or at least make the bass the fruit of the buildup or something like that.

Drums: 2/2- They're good. Nuff said.

Instruments Used: 1/2- At the first half of the song, the main instrument wasn't really sounding like it meant to be a main instrument. I like how it builds up, but two and a half minutes is a little much.

Mood: 2/2- I dont even know

Burn7 responds:

Whoa I just realized I never responded to this. Lol I must be slacking or something.

Thanks for your in-depth reviews, they're always cool to read.

Lol I like how you gave up at the end though.

[<Insert Catchy Title>]

<insert opinon>

Melody: 2/2 - <insert helpful advice>
Bass: 2/2 - <insert helpful advice>
Drums: 1/2 - <insert helpful advice>
Instruments used: 2/2 - <insert helpful advice>
Mood: 1/2 - <insert helpful advice>

OVERALL: 8/10
<insert helpful advice>

no-ma-designs responds:

<insert grateful reply>

[Tectonic_Techno]

wow

Melody: 1/2- It's kind of rambling. Make the main tune shorter
Bass: 3/2- I really like this synth here. Its all over the place
Drums: 1/2- I think you should have used heavier drum sets for this one.
Instruments used: 2/2- Nothing to report
Mood: 2/2- I actually kinda felt wobbly listening to the song, like an earthquake. I hope thats what you meant by "Tectonic"

OVERALL: 9/10

RawGreen responds:

Will do :o

Thank you for the criticism, it's very handy, I'll go over the song right away. :D

And yeah, it was intended to be like an earthquake-ish, close enough ^^'

[Zelda Cover V1 (WIP)]

O_O

We uploaded the same exact song within an hour of each other LOL! Except yours had the dungeon theme in it too.

Melody: 2/2- The beginning guitar was waaaaaaaaaay too high! ACK! It got really good later, but the guitar needs a bit of treble reduction throughout. The rhythm guitar was nice.

Drums: 1/2- I think they werent loud like your others.

Bass: 2/2- Dark

Instruments: 2/2- Nailed it

Mood: 2/2- I felt the mood deep in this one. You did well again!

OVERALL: 9/10- I got lazy with the review. Check mine out and possibly leave some feedback, please?

Burn7 responds:

Hahah! That's actually really funny. I'll check yours out dude :)

[Laserdance - Power Run V2]

w0w

you have a thing for the 80s. i like it.

Melody: 1/2- Even though its a remix, this could be a bit louder.

Drums: 2/2- Not as tough as Galactic Race but still nice.

Bass: 1/2- Weak.

Instruments: 2/2- Pretty '87

Mood: 1/2- Not enough energy

OVERALL: 7/10

Sorry I didnt make an in depth review. Are you even reading this?

benanderson responds:

Cover, not a remix.

Its ironic how you say the bass is weak and the drums are not tough, the drums are very punchy (especially the kick, the Linn LM1's crowning jewel) and the bass line from the Juno106 sends the spectrum analyser (and my subwoofer) mad, same with the main synthesizer lead.

Can I ask what kind of speakers you are using to listen to this music? I am using a £400 set-up with a logitech subwoofer and two Tannoy floor standing speakers.

The instruments are genuine 80s synthesizers. The Juno106 is from 1984, the CZ3000 is from 1986, the DX9 is from 1983, and the two drum machines from 1979.

[I Dreamed Of This]

No reviews?! Bullsh!t

It needs one.

Melody: 2/2- I thought synth pads could never do the job. I was wrong. Piano rocked too.

Bass: 2/2- Good, i wouldn't have used that instrument for it

Drums: 1/2- For a DnB song, they were too slow. Even if the song's mood is slow, DnB drums are always fast. And the drums and bass need to play together at all times. Trust me, it will help a lot.

Instruments Used: 2/2- I liked the pads and the piano. The bass might need to be changed, but its not that bad.

Mood: 2/2- Really felt like a dream.

OVERALL: 9/10- A few minor edits and it's perfect

[-Hospital-]

O_O

OMG- oh i just peed myself.