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[Pencilmation #7]

Meh...

1: Plot recycled from past episodes.

2: Sub-par drawings. Pencilmation doesnt mean squiggly lines all the time.

3: Too boring. Make something more exciting.

4: Dont rush your flashes. What has it been, like a week and a half since pencilmation 6? take some time to work on your flashes. We dont mine waiting a month or two for new better episodes.

This didnt stand out. People are biased to your creative style, and that is why you get front page and all sorts of awards. I think this wasnt as good as your others.

[Batman: Bright Day]

Okay, but...

It want that funny, this looked like it would only take a few minutes to do, though. We can wait for your next submission, so dont rush.

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Gunshot

[Captain Falcon!!]

Nice animation

Great special effects. How long did it take you to make this? Because it's short.

Hulalaoo responds:

6 FUCKING HOUR, 3 HOUR THE ECENE OF THE FALCON PUNCH

[Jesus vs. Godzilla DX]

Great movie

Since when was Godzilla green? That always ticks me off. And the drawing was lacking in some parts. I docked off only one point for that, because Jesus and Godzilla= win!

[IceandFire]

Good Job

The only reason I gave it a nine- ahh, 4get it.

Fighting Movie

Action: 2/2- kept it going very well
Choreography: 2/2- Amazing job as a fight choreographer.
Graphics: 1/2- Meh, not the greatest stick fight I've seen
Clarity: 2/2- I could follow it well.
Moves: 1/2- need some work on the moves. It was pretty much swords the whole time.

When someone loops a fight scene, it gets intense. Good job.

[Beer With The Guys 1]

Hmph...

Not funny at all. You need a bit more jokes.

But thanks for using my music.

[Echo City - part 1]

Animation needs work

Try using:

1: Pen Tablet (if you arent already)
2: If no pen tablet, try using the brush tool for things like faces.

Other than that, I think it was a bit short to be slowing down your computer. You need a bit more stuff to introduce the story.

And also, why didnt the police actually shoot back at the guy?

Anyways, it looks like it might be a great story, but I cant tell since there was barely any intro to the actual story. I hope that you continue and take my advice.

fearing responds:

personally i love gritty and thats what reflects my drawing style best.

i will continue to use my own techniques as its what i enjoy.

the police did not shoot back because i am a lazy mother fucker and i had already put too much work into this..

in fact i probably wont bother doing a part 2 because i cant be fucked

thanks

[Awesome Cracks Down]

Meh, just not funny

Seriously, man. You're starting to lose your magic. I mean your movies arent just gut-splitting enough. Compared to your great work on Awesome Center, Awesome Gaiden, and the legendary Metal Gear Awesome, this just completely fails.

Oh well, I guess you do have tons of other projects on your hands.

This was not the best choice for you to parody. As this flash is concerned, I usually get references even if I've never played the game. But I couldnt pick out a single moment that made me laugh.

I do give you a three for effort, though. Well, I hope the next flash of yours will be better.

[The Paper Prince]

Nice Idea

Animation: 1/2
Sound Quality: 1/2
Story: 2/2
Effort: 2/2
Length:2/2

Good job, although the animation and sound quality needed a bit of work. It had a very nice story and length, and seems like a lot of effort was put into this.
Good job.

[SW2's StreetFighterShorts]

Meh

It wasnt even that funny. I've seen these jokes overdone so many times. This and the entire collab isnt that good.

But, it looks like some effort was put into this, so I'll give you some credit.

Shadowii2 responds:

As it's a fact everyone won't probably like the same stuff, I'm not complaining. That's your opinion and I respect it.

Thanks for your thoughts.