Dachampster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'll Sue Ya!]

Double Win

Great animation and great song!

Also, Is this a parody of testify?

[Drink Your Prune Juice]

Transformers

That was one of my favorite scenes. The drawing could be a little more detailed. As in more scenery....

sk8termike responds:

Well i did do it all with a mouse but thanks.

[Ask Taco-Man: Flash]

You need help

I didnt mean it like that...

COMEDY- ORIGINAL

Jokes: 1/2 - Not horrid, not great. You might need an assistant writer or someone to help you write jokes.

Voicing: 0/2 - I really dont like your voices, you might need to get someone to do some for you. Using your voice for one character is fine, but unless you can really twist your voice, you might need some others. This is generally for the other flashes you have.

Flow: 1/2- there was a joke, then boring half jokes. Keep it going for the whole time. It really wasnt good enough.

Animation: 2/2- satisfactory, you kept it simple and didnt make any real mistakes. Some artist try to do too much without practicing and end up with crap. good job on that.

Stupidity: 1/2- If this was funny, it wouldnt be stupid. This is halfway stupid. You need to work on your comedy.

OVERALL: 5/10

SUGGESTIONS:

Dude, your cartoons have skill, but just not enough comedy. I want to be saying, "hahahah, its a talking taco" instead of "WTF, a talking taco?! Your jokes are not funny at all. I suggest to work on the comedy and I dare you to make me laugh next time.

[Girlchan in Paradise Ep2]

Good work you guys

What people dont realize is that this is a parody, and they wont get it of they dont watch anime. I have watched my fair share of anime and I can say that this parody is great.
Anyway, onto the voting...

PARODY

References: 3/2- Tons of hidden ones and also some blatant ones too.

Voice Acting: 1/2- good, not spectacular, but not bad.

Jokes: 1/2 - Not enough jokes to please the people who wont get the obscure references.

Animation: 2/2 Nice drawings here.

Effort: 2/2- Great Effort here

Characters: 2/2- The characters here had great design and just screamed parody

Smoothness: 2/2- nothing much to say here

Music: 2/2- Kingdoom's music really added onto the parody.

Writing: 2/2- It was perfect, needed more jokes though

Intelligence: 2/2- I wouldnt expect something this intelligent from you, Egoraptor. Something with this much thought and genius wouldnt be your style. Tomamoto's writing was superb, just needed more laughs.

OVERALL: 19/20--------------------------10/10-
-------------------------------5/5

SUGGESTIONS:

What I really didnt like here really was the lack of pandering here. Most of your animations pandered to people who played video games (97% of teens), while this one, which panders to anime watchers (67% of teens) gets tons of low scores. If the anime references were a bit less deep then more people would get it. I hate to agree with flamers, but most of the jokes that (dumbasses) people really can recognize here were all done before. I suggest continuing Girlchan, but with funnier/more recognizable jokes. I personally think that this animation is one of your best, and teaming up with Tomamoto was a really good move to pull something like this off well. Nice team effort to make this animation

And thaaaaaat explaaaaaaaains everything.

-Dachampster

[Rainbowball of Doom]

Good job

Very creative. We need more people like you in Newgrounds.

(not gonna go in depth since i'm tired)

[[Prototype]]

lawl

i liked it, nice job on the animation. i like your style. I just wish it was longer.

Battosai810 responds:

Thanks - next time I do a game parody it should be lengthier, as I know my next few toons will be.

[Tarboy]

Amazing freaking work

ACTION FLICK

Fight Scenes: 2/2

Story: 2/2

Animation: 3/2

Creativity: 3/2

Music: 3/2

OVERALL: 13/10 HIGHSCORE

ENTER NAME: JAMES + HANIA

I really dont have much to say at all, I loved this. Newgrounds needs people like you around to produce something halfway decent, you know?

SUGGESTIONS:

NONE

[Boombox!]

Here we go

A music video review... double huge review.

FLASH

Animation: 1/2
Voice Acting: 1/2
Story: 2/2
Smoothness: 1/2
Artwork: 1/2
OVERALL: 6/10

SUGGESTION SECTOR:

If you don't have a tablet, I suggest you get one. If you do, learn how to use it better.

The lines on the aliens were too thick.

Not enough detail, it didnt really take away from the animation that much for me since thats my style as well, but it would make the flash look a lot more nicer.

I don't know about the voice for this song. It sounds kind of young for this song.

PRAISE STATION:

Not bad for your first flash! In fact this is really good for a first flash.

You stuck with it the whole project. Sometimes with longer animations, people get lazy throughout it as the thing goes on. You didnt do that- you stayed focused and committed to your animation.

---MUSIC---

Melody: 2/2
Bass: 1/2
Drum: 1/2
Effort: 2/2
Listen ability: 2/2
Catchiness: 3/2
Smoothness: 2/2
Structure: 2/2
Instrument use: 1/2
Mood: 0/2

OVERALL: 16/20 8/10 4/5

SUGGESTION SECTOR:

This song didnt nearly have enough bass as advertised. If you are calling that main riff as bass, it was way too high to be the bass.

I didnt feel the guitars necessary to put here, they werent a complete fail, but not really necessary.

That main riff instrument just sounded annoying. I would change that.

The lyrics werent that bad, I suggest not saying £u¢k every verse. That just doesnt really sound like your style.

The drumming was not good. I just have to say that. You could have blasted the bass drum more, and that would make a world of difference.

PRAISE STATION:

I liked the catchiness of the song, it might be stuck in my head for a while.

I did like the guitar once I got used to it in the song, its just that it wasnt necessary.

FINAL WORD:

Not your best work, not your worst, but not your best. I was disappointed with the music, and impressed with the flash work that you did here. Sorry for the long-ass review.

-Dachampster

[my 1s stck fight on flash]

Okay

Not gonna go in depth since this is your first attempt.

Well, I will put some suggestions here.

1: Stick figure stuff isnt hard to make, spend more time on it and make it longer.

2: Backgrounds are easy to draw, go ahead and make something.

3: I dont know why is is so zoomed out, please do something about that.

4: WtF iS wItH ThAt MuSiC?!

What I did like:

1: Nice effects for a first try, means that you put tons of effort into it.

2: Good physics and clean drawings.

OVERALL: Not amazing, but good for a first try. You may become one of those amazing choreographing stick animations with those breathtaking fight scenes and tons of special effects. I think you can go there. Continue to work in flash!

-Dachampster

[Phoenix Wrong Unjustified]

Great job

I LIKE PIE

ChaoticTrashCan responds:

ROFL "People find this review helpful!"

Thanks too.