Dachampster's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Static Wave]

Mixed Nuts

Melody: 2/2
Bass: 2/2
Drum: 0/2
Effort: 1/2
Listen ability: 3/2
Catchiness: 4/2
Smoothness: 1/2
Structure: 1/2
Instrument use: 2/2
Mood: 2/2

OVERALL: 17/20 9/10 5/5

[Falling Demons]

Nice.... I guess

Melody: 0/2
Bass: 2/2
Drum: 3/2
Effort: 0/2
Listen ability: 2/2
Catchiness: 2/2
Smoothness: 2/2
Structure: 1/2
Instrument use: 1/2
Mood: 1/2

OVERALL: 14/20 7/10

SUGGESTION SECTOR:
Why review someone who doesnt go on newgrounds unless she has another smash hit to submit?
PRAISE STATION:
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FINAL WORD
....... hello.

[Victory Dance]

HOLY CHEESE WHIZ

HOLY CRAP THIS IS AMAZING!

Melody: 2/2
Bass: 2/2
Drum: 1/2
Effort: 2/2
Listen ability: 2/2
Catchiness: 3/2
Smoothness: 2/2
Structure: 2/2
Instrument use: 2/2
Mood: 2/2

OVERALL: 20/20 10/10 5/5

HIGHSCORE!

ENTER NAME- JOHNNY
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#1: Metalcan- Desert Rose 11/10
#2: JohnnyFrizz- Victory Dance 10/10

SUGGESTION SECTOR:

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Okay. I have a brief few suggestions, and when I say brief, I really do mean brief.

- I do think that the vocals could have been put on a leash. You shouldn't have used it this much. Maybe after the song fully builds.

- The bass could have been a little bit louder, and you could have used a different sample for it. But its not an entire loss.

- The drums felt more like a rock kit than a techno kit, you could have used something a little more synthetic.

- The song built a little too quickly. I think that you might want to give the song some time to build.

PRAISE STATION:

-I really liked the rave feel you gave to this song.

- The beat was extremely catchy, making for a 3/2 on that review.

- The chanting was extremely catchy as well, addictive.

- I really liked the synth backgrounds here. They really added that punch you needed for this song to come off right.

FINAL WORD:

Amazing job man, I cant wait until you come back in the fall.

- Dachampster

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Awesome review!!!

[Pokemon Route 1 (Red/Blue)]

Sufficient

Check out my pkmn remixes.

[Into Shit]

W00t

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Melody: 1/2
Bass: 2/2
Drum: 1/2
Effort: 1/2
Listenability: 2/2
Catchiness: 3/2
Smoothness: 0/2
Structure: 2/2
Instrument use: 1/2
Mood: 2/2
OVERALL 15/20 which is 8/10 and 4/5

SUGGESTION SECTION:

Your songs are too skeletal.

Put more work into your music.

Try adding more of a melody, nothing fancy, just something to jam too, you know?

I dont know what kind of program you're using, but you either need a new one, or use different instruments here. I think that could help a ton.

Dont be afraid to get out there and blast your drums and bass.

Take more time to perfect your "sh1t."

PRAISE STATION:

The beat kept me moving- good work with that.

The main riff you had here was catchy, had my legs moving quite a bit.

Great to listen to.

FINAL WORD: I hope this review helps for future submissions. Nice work on this, but you have quite a few things to work out.

[God Is]

Um.... ok?

Melody: 0/2
Bass: 0/2
Drum: 2/2
Effort: 1/2
Listenability: 1/2
Catchiness: 2/2
Smoothness: 2/2
Structure: 2/2
Instrument use: 1/2
Mood: 1/2

OVERALL 12/20 6/10 3/5
Are you kidding me man? WTF is this, anyway?

[Duel of the Rivals]

Im lazy

No comments really this time.

Melody: 0/2 - Fail
Bass: 1/2- Not enough
Drum: 2/2- funny sounding
Effort: 1/2- lacking
Listenability: 1/2
Catchiness: 1/2 meh
Smoothness: 2/2- good job
Structure: 2/2
Instrument use: 1/2
Mood: 1/2- doesnt sound much like a big fight.

OVERALL: 12/20 or 6/10

Dont take this personal, pal. I just cant be effed right now. I dont really feel like reviewing. Not bad though, try to add a melody in here.

[St. Thomas - Sorohanro]

Okay, but...

Melody: 1/2
Bass: 1/2
Drum: 1/2
Effort: 2/2
Listenability: 2/2
Catchiness: 2/2
Smoothness: 2/2
Structure: 2/2
Instrument use: 2/2
Mood: 2/2
OVERALL: 16/20 = 8/10

Good: Nice smoothness and mood, and its a good catchy tune. I really liked the trumpet here. I also play the trumpet in my band.

Bad: It seemed at times the instruments didnt really match. Did you record most things using a metronome at the same time? Because that would help. The bass was okay, not exceptional. The drum sounded messy at times. The trumpet sometimes went off a bit, but thats what happens with live recording. It was a little too subtle, like the intensity of the last few notes was perfect. You should have used that bit of intensity throughout the entire song, to give it a bit more of a upbeat feel. Because in order for the song to be lazy and slow, you need more instruments than you did. I understand that this is for a 3 instrument challenge, but you can do more than that with 3 instruments and a drum.

Not bad though.

sorohanro responds:

Thank you for review.
About rhythm... well, what you might call messy is in fact the Latin way of arranging rhythm, accents don't fall on he first beat but on the last half of the 4-th beat, so the drums seem to go ahead the melody. That is what make people dance (I mean Salsa).

The recording is not made only using a metronome, in fact most of the track is sequenced.
Well, I suggest the you listen to some more Latin music (I recommend Michel Camilo, Arturo Sandoval and Paquito D'Rivera).
Hope you'll like more some of my other tracks ;)

[Legend Of Zelda: The Remix]

Ok job, needs improvement.

Melody: 1/2-for a legendary song, you messed up the main riff pretty bad. I automatically have to dock points off.
Beat: 2/2 - catchy and jamming'. Simple, but effective.
Base: 2/2-Big sound, like a club.
Effort: 1/2 - could have done a little more. It is way too skeletal here.
Drum: 0/2-was lacking to help the bass.
Listenability: 0/2-This song was overall hard to listen to.
Catchiness: 2/2-automatically Zelda is catchy. You didn't take away from that.
Mood: 2/2 - no comment
Instrument use: 0/2 - I didn't like the samples you used here at all.
Structure: 1/2-This song seems sloppily done. The intro could have just been one bar, and you could have raved the end part or a few more bars.
Smoothness: 1/2-It didn't flow as I thought it would.

OVERALL: I am very disappointed with this piece. This was definitely not your best work. I know you can do better. Work harder next time! 12/20

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Hahaha I bet you could have done it a lot better 3 years ago, right?

[StereoTactik's DnB Tutorial!]

I liek piezzz

You only have one song that's good and that's Believe. When r gonna do something better'?

I also like pie!!!!!!!!
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