Score: 10

"Double Win"

submission: I'll Sue Ya!

date: December 16, 2009

Great animation and great song!

Also, Is this a parody of testify?

Score: 8

"Transformers"

submission: Drink Your Prune Juice

date: December 10, 2009

That was one of my favorite scenes. The drawing could be a little more detailed. As in more scenery....

Score: 5

"You need help"

submission: Ask Taco-Man: Flash

date: September 8, 2009

I didnt mean it like that...

COMEDY- ORIGINAL

Jokes: 1/2 - Not horrid, not great. You might need an assistant writer or someone to help you write jokes.

Voicing: 0/2 - I really dont like your voices, you might need to get someone to do some for you. Using your voice for one character is fine, but unless you can really twist your voice, you might need some others. This is generally for the other flashes you have.

Flow: 1/2- there was a joke, then boring half jokes. Keep it going for the whole time. It really wasnt good enough.

Animation: 2/2- satisfactory, you kept it simple and didnt make any real mistakes. Some artist try to do too much without practicing and end up with crap. good job on that.

Stupidity: 1/2- If this was funny, it wouldnt be stupid. This is halfway stupid. You need to work on your comedy.

OVERALL: 5/10

SUGGESTIONS:

Dude, your cartoons have skill, but just not enough comedy. I want to be saying, "hahahah, its a talking taco" instead of "WTF, a talking taco?! Your jokes are not funny at all. I suggest to work on the comedy and I dare you to make me laugh next time.

Score: 7

"If I heard X-mass one more time...."

submission: White X-Mass

date: December 21, 2009

its christmas...

Nice song

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Christmas is coming!

date: December 16, 2009

It would be nicer if you added a christmas song melody in here somewhere.

Also, you might want to add a stronger bass and different drums.

Im doing Christmas songs as well, please check them out!

Score: 9

"Head Bobbin' finger lickin' good"

submission: Blue brass of the beast

date: November 25, 2009

Drum: 3/2- Extremely catchy, great rhythm, pretty much perfect.

Bass: 1/2- This song definitely needed some low heavy bass. You had bass, but it wasn't continual, and wasn't low enough. It was lacking in that part.

Melody: 2/2- The "bass" that you had here pretty much acted as the melody. There wasn't much to it, but it really added to the mood of the song, and I appreciate that in this song.

Flow: 1/2- This song was a little too choppy for me, I don't know if its a taste in music-- must not be because this is my favorite genre of music. It sounds like you took the song and broke it into pieces.

Mood: 2/2- "Blue Brass of the Beast" was a pretty deadly-sounding title, and you brought the pain with the drums here. Good job portraying the mood. Deep, dark and deadly song.

OVERALL: 9/10- Great song dude.